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Jayakrishnan Aluva commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:46 Margret ,poem is an expression of emotions .You get what the poet thinks to express .Here only a language ,the language of emotion .Ok Comment history Margaret Gudkov 16 November 20:42 My friend..you need to revise that ..is not gramatically right..wnated..and wear or you meant where?....is raw ..please revise..i hope you understand..and not hurt.. Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:41 Life is beautiful .it depends on our concept of life Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:40 WITH OUT TRUE IN YOUR WORDS BROTHER.J.K Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:39 WHAT? TODAY LIFE IS BEAUTYFULL? LIFE IS BEAUTY FULL? Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 19:54 Love is beautiful .Life is beautiful .Enjoy and feel the true spirit of both .brother ,jk Margaret Gudkov commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Margaret Gudkov 16 November 20:42 My friend..you need to revise that ..is not gramatically right..wnated..and wear or you meant where?....is raw ..please revise..i hope you understand..and not hurt.. Comment history Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:41 Life is beautiful .it depends on our concept of life Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:40 WITH OUT TRUE IN YOUR WORDS BROTHER.J.K Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:39 WHAT? TODAY LIFE IS BEAUTYFULL? LIFE IS BEAUTY FULL? Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 19:54 Love is beautiful .Life is beautiful .Enjoy and feel the true spirit of both .brother ,jk Herojit Philem 16 November 19:52 Wnated? Original post Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 19:25 wear is love? in wear is love? i search many wear... no love no love hear all all are wnated something yes... a something is for only a love that is today love are love today?

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Margaret Gudkov commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:21 I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve Comment history Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:06 life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull? Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:04 queeny gona beaty is not only a poem...ugly also a poem... Queeny Gona 16 November 20:59 You have put in your emotions well. Please take Margaret's suggestion to make your piece of write beautiful! Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:52 love is today gramatically? life is..?margarate! Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:46 Margret ,poem is an expression of emotions .You get what the poet thinks to express .Here only a language ,the language of emotion .Ok Queeny Gona commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Queeny Gona 16 November 20:59 You have put in your emotions well. Please take Margaret's suggestion to make your piece of write beautiful! Comment history Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:52 love is today gramatically? life is..?margarate! Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:46 Margret ,poem is an expression of emotions .You get what the poet thinks to express .Here only a language ,the language of emotion .Ok Margaret Gudkov 16 November 20:42 My friend..you need to revise that ..is not gramatically right..wnated..and wear or you meant where?....is raw ..please revise..i hope you understand..and not hurt.. Jayakrishnan Aluva 16 November 20:41 Life is beautiful .it depends on our concept of life Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 20:40 WITH OUT TRUE IN YOUR WORDS BROTHER.J.K

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publishing platform . Abdul Wahab   how to react on this poem i do not know , but you try to be modern but what is ''fly live '' ? Original post THIS ALSO LIFE Dink... Eat... day by day do sex... live to fly fly live earn more more earn dead smile are with smile young and old age no problem...? problem no!

View Post on Facebook · Edit email settings · Reply to this email to add a comment Margaret Gudkov commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:36 Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like o.ffence... THen.i am sorr y Comment history Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 22:32 i don't'want u r help.. Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:21 I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:06 life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull? Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:04 queeny gona beaty is not only a poem...ugly also a poem... Queeny Gona 16 November 20:59 You have put in your emotions well. Please take Margaret's suggestion to make your piece of write beautiful!

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Narendra Rai commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Narendra Rai 17 November 00:06 Good... Comment history Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:36 Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like o.ffence... THen.i am sorr y Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 22:32 i don't'want u r help.. Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:21 I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:06 life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull? Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:04 queeny gona beaty is not only a poem...ugly also a poem... publishing platform . Abdul Wahab 16 November 23:44 how to react on this poem i do not know , but you try to be modern but what is ''fly live '' ? Original post Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 23:36 THIS ALSO LIFE Dink... Eat... day by day do sex... live to fly fly live earn more more earn dead smile are with smile young and old age no problem...? problem no! View Post on Facebook · Edit email settings · Reply to this email to add a comment publishing platform . Abdul Wahab 16 November 23:44 how to react on this poem i do not know , but you try to be modern but what is ''fly live '' ? Original post Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 23:36 THIS ALSO LIFE Dink... Eat... day by day do sex... live to fly fly live earn more more earn dead smile are with smile young and old age no problem...? problem no! View Post on Facebook · Edit email settings · Reply to this email to add a comment

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Parul Rastogi 17 November 00:07 Sir I agree that emotions are d soul of poetry but we would like you to make your poems simple one so that we can also understand what you wish to say . Am I right mr. Narendra ,Queeny mam and Mam Margaret ???

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Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:36 Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like Parul Rastogi commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop Parul Rastogi 17 November 00:07 Sir I agree that emotions are d soul of poetry but we would like you to make your poems simple one so that we can also understand what you wish to say . Am I right mr. Narendra ,Queeny mam and Mam Margaret ??? Comment history Narendra Rai 17 November 00:06 Good... Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:36 Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like o.ffence... THen.i am sorr y Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 22:32 i don't'want u r help.. Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:21 I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:06 life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull?