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how to react on this poem i do not know , but...
Abdul Wahab  
how to react on this poem i do not know , but you try to be modern but what is ''fly live '' ?
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Otteri Selvakumar
THIS ALSO LIFE

Dink...

Eat...

day by day

do sex...

live to fly

fly live

earn more

more earn

dead smile are

with smile

young and old age

no problem...?

problem no!
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Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and...
Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:36
Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like o.ffence... THen.i am sorr y
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Otteri Selvakumar
Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 22:32
i don't'want u r help..
Margaret Gudkov
Margaret Gudkov 16 November 22:21
I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve
Otteri Selvakumar
Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:06
life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull?
Otteri Selvakumar
Otteri Selvakumar 16 November 21:04
queeny gona beaty is not only a poem...ugly also a poem...
Queeny Gona
Queeny Gona 16 November 20:59
You have put in your emotions well. Please take Margaret's suggestion to make your piece of write beautiful!


















 

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