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சனி, 15 டிசம்பர், 2012
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Abdul Wahab
how to react on this poem i do not know , but you try to be modern but what is ''fly live '' ?
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THIS ALSO LIFE
Dink...
Eat...
day by day
do sex...
live to fly
fly live
earn more
more earn
dead smile are
with smile
young and old age
no problem...?
problem no!
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Margaret Gudkov
commented on your photo in Universal Muse, an International Poetic Journal & Workshop
Margaret Gudkov
16 November 22:36
Fine..if you not ready forfriendly help..and take like o.ffence... THen.i am sorr y
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Otteri Selvakumar
16 November 22:32
i don't'want u r help..
Margaret Gudkov
16 November 22:21
I do not agree..i know that emotions..but is a mess..i am sorry..i do not want to hurt yo ir feeling..just help you to improve
Otteri Selvakumar
16 November 21:06
life is ugly...love is ugly... how can write my piece beautyfull?
Otteri Selvakumar
16 November 21:04
queeny gona beaty is not only a poem...ugly also a poem...
Queeny Gona
16 November 20:59
You have put in your emotions well. Please take Margaret's suggestion to make your piece of write beautiful!
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