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people and poets did not understand or like
it till another poet took the idea as usual to pen an
explanation
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my dear friends once i wrote on that
particular topic showing "love" in normal everday
life
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Is not..i also did not get
it
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it's a parody my young
friends
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Yes i agree with mr. Narendra.
I am not
getting ur poem sir !
You must explain it in a simple way so that we may love
it.
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Narendra Rai
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my
dear friends once i wrote on that particular topic showing "love" in normal
everday life
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Comment history
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Is not..i also did not get
it
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it's a parody
my young friends
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Yes i agree with mr. Narendra.
I am not
getting ur poem sir !
You must explain it in a simple way so that we may love
it.
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Totally messed
up this is the truth!!
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Sir, i read your poem thrice time but
couldn't get what are you trying to say or impart message... Sorry Sir, it is
beyond my understanding ... EVeryone is free to comment here on posted poems by
all our fellow poets and poetess, if they happen to find flaws or mistakes,
they're all here to put their suggestions so that one can improve their writing
skill if one doesn't want to have assistance from anyone nobody would read or
leave their comments... Sorry sir ...
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LOVE
IS...?
somebudy say for me
life is beauty full
love is
beauty full
now today
life is making a man
with a
dog...
with a monkey...
with donkey...
love is make
today
a men and women
today mad...
and
sexer...
that's all up the sky
down the
earth...?
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my
dear friends once i wrote on that particular topic showing "love" in normal
everday life
|
Comment history
|
Is not..i also did not get
it
|
|
it's a parody
my young friends
|
|
Yes i agree with mr. Narendra.
I am not
getting ur poem sir !
You must explain it in a simple way so that we may love
it.
|
|
Totally messed
up this is the truth!!
|
|
Sir, i read your poem thrice time but
couldn't get what are you trying to say or impart message... Sorry Sir, it is
beyond my understanding ... EVeryone is free to comment here on posted poems by
all our fellow poets and poetess, if they happen to find flaws or mistakes,
they're all here to put their suggestions so that one can improve their writing
skill if one doesn't want to have assistance from anyone nobody would read or
leave their comments... Sorry sir ...
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Original
post
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LOVE
IS...?
somebudy say for me
life is beauty full
love is
beauty full
now today
life is making a man
with a
dog...
with a monkey...
with donkey...
love is make
today
a men and women
today mad...
and
sexer...
that's all up the sky
down the
earth...?
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a comment. |
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my
dear friends once i wrote on that particular topic showing "love" in normal
everday life
|
Comment history
|
Is not..i also did not get
it
|
|
it's a parody
my young friends
|
|
Yes i agree with mr. Narendra.
I am not
getting ur poem sir !
You must explain it in a simple way so that we may love
it.
|
|
Totally messed
up this is the truth!!
|
|
Sir, i read your poem thrice time but
couldn't get what are you trying to say or impart message... Sorry Sir, it is
beyond my understanding ... EVeryone is free to comment here on posted poems by
all our fellow poets and poetess, if they happen to find flaws or mistakes,
they're all here to put their suggestions so that one can improve their writing
skill if one doesn't want to have assistance from anyone nobody would read or
leave their comments... Sorry sir ...
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Original
post
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LOVE
IS...?
somebudy say for me
life is beauty full
love is
beauty full
now today
life is making a man
with a
dog...
with a monkey...
with donkey...
love is make
today
a men and women
today mad...
and
sexer...
that's all up the sky
down the
earth...?
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